Beginner - Epic Beat - Beats & Grooves (Tablaturas para Bateria)

Sap to you all! My name is Radabe and I decided that I would try my first tab, its just a beat. I think its flippin epic! But please tell me what you think and rate my tab or email me for any queries! Shot, chow, rad!

C = Cymbal 
H = Hi hat
S = Snare
B = Bass Drum

C x-------------------------------x------------------------------- 
H x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-
S ----x-------x-------x-------x-------x-------x-------x-----x---x-
B xx-x--xx--xx----xx-x--xx--xx-x--xx-x--xx--xx----xx-x--xx-x-x-x--